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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (MQTT-159) 2.3 Variable Header
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-159?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Richard Coppen updated MQTT-159: -------------------------------- Affects Version/s: 3.1.1 Component/s: edits > 2.3 Variable Header > ------------------- > > Key: MQTT-159 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-159 > Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC > Issue Type: Bug > Components: edits > Affects Versions: 3.1.1 > Environment: Grammar > Reporter: Patrick Durusau > > 2.3 Variable Header reads: > ***** > Some types of MQTT Control Packets contain a variable header component. It resides between the fixed header and the payload. The content of the variable header varies depending on the Packet type, however one field - the Packet Identifier - is common to several packet types. > ***** > The better practice is to not say *Some types* or *several packet types." > If it is important information, spell out which MQTT Control Packets have a variable header component. and list the packet types with a Packet Identifier. > Otherwise the text is vague and every users must puzzle that out for themselves. You use some/Some a total of ten times in the draft. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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