[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-302) WD4: Minor suggestions in sections 2.3.3.X

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Brian Raymor created MQTT-302:
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             Summary: WD4: Minor suggestions in sections 2.3.3.X
                 Key: MQTT-302
                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-302
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: edits
    Affects Versions: 5
            Reporter: Brian Raymor
            Assignee: Andrew Banks
            Priority: Trivial
             Fix For: 5


Line 671:

The CONNECT, CONNACK, PUBLISH and DISCONNECT Packet variable header ends with a set of Identifier/Value pairs, this is made up of a length field followed by the Identifier/Value pairs themselves.

Proposed: The CONNECT, CONNACK, PUBLISH, and DISCONNECT Packet variable headers end with an optional set of Identifier/Value pairs. 

Line 672:

... this is made up of a length field followed by the Identifier/Value pairs themselves.

Note: It feels redundant to discuss the composition since it is then immediately described in the following section - 2.3.3.1?

Lines 674-675
The length or the Identifier/Value fields does not include ...

Proposed: "The length of the ..."

Lines 676-677
The Identifier/Value pairs can appear in any order.

Proposed: The Identifier/Value pairs MAY appear in any order.

Lines 681-682:

On receipt of an Identifier or Value, that is not defined for the Packet the receiver MUST close the network connection.

Proposed: On receipt of an Identifier or Value that is not defined for the Packet, the receiver MUST close the network connection.

Line 684: In this specification, only one-byte Identifier's are used.

Proposed: "one-byte Identifiers".



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