RE: [mqtt] Please review working draft WD08

[Konstantin Dotchkoff <Konstantin.Dotchkoff@microsoft.com>]

Hi all,

I completed a review pass through the WD-08 of the specification. Please find attached my notes and edits.
I primarily added comments, but also did some minor changes in the text such as typos and formatting that don't change its meaning.

Thanks,
Konstantin

-----Original Message-----
From: mqtt@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:mqtt@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Mr. Richard Coppen
Sent: Thursday, October 27, 2016 9:49 AM
To: mqtt@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [mqtt] Please review working draft WD08

Hi all, 

Please take some time to review the latest working draft of MQTT v5.0.

Our editors have done an outstanding job and many of the features outlined in our charter have made it into the spec. Now's a great time to review and most importantly provide feedback.

Here's the direct public link to wd08 in pdf > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.oasis-open.org%2Fcommittees%2Fdocument.php%3Fdocument_id%3D59173%26wg_abbrev%3Dmqtt&data=02%7C01%7Ckonstantin.dotchkoff%40microsoft.com%7C44bac2b416fb43d3858d08d3fe89369c%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C636131837688638500&sdata=fd%2B%2FmU1qb3XuOx6G78x9mgmjY5VX9hLcJ8IfQIw8s8w%3D&reserved=0 <

If you'd like to review in another format, please log in to Kavi and navigate to the "Working drafts" directory in the TC Documents area.

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Best regards


Richard

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