[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-436) Feedback from Ken Borgendale on WD14

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Rahul Gupta commented on MQTT-436:
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Changed the phrase back to "Session State in the Client".

> Feedback from Ken Borgendale on WD14
> ------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-436
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-436
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>    Affects Versions: 5, wd13
>            Reporter: Andrew Banks
>            Assignee: Rahul Gupta
>             Fix For: wd14
>
>
> During my review I found a few formatting errors such as missing blank lines and a couple of spelling errors which I fixed.  These mostly predated wd14.  I also made a change to appendix C to add reason code into a statement about return codes.  
> We should take another pass some time to decide if the various uses of client and server (lower case) are acceptable.
> There is another example of the reason code thing in section 2.2.2.2 but I will leave that to you to word correctly.
> [
> At line 2202 (Topic Alias) you changed the "whose values exceeds" to "exceeding", but the same phrase occurs in the next paragraph which you did not change.  There was some confusion from Solace that the range was 1 to max (inclusive).  They thought you could have max number regardless of the value.  The previous wording seems less ambiguous in this case.  Whatever we use should be the same in the two paragraphs.
> I see that you changed the pharse "Session State in the Client" to Client's Session State".  I think the original is somewhat less ambiguous,



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