[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-487) Further RFC 2119 review

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Peter Niblett created MQTT-487:
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             Summary: Further RFC 2119 review
                 Key: MQTT-487
                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-487
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: core
    Affects Versions: wd14
            Reporter: Peter Niblett


1. required/REQUIRED
- 3.2.2.3.9  User Property "The receiver of a CONNACK containing this property is not required to parse or process this property."  This sentence does not appear in the description of User Property in other packets, so I am not sure that it is needed here. 
If a sentence is needed, it would be clearer to say
"The content and meaning of this property is not defined by this specification. The receiver of a CONNACK containing this property MAY ignore it".

- 4.10.1 change "However, this is not required." to "However, this is not necessary".

- 4.12. "the exchanges and processing required by the Client and Server to complete the authentication"  -> "the exchanges and processing to be performed by the Client and Server to complete the authentication."

- 4.12 "This property can be used to provide data as required by the Authentication Method." -> "This property can be used to provide data needed by the Authentication Method."

-  4.12 "The Client and Server exchange AUTH packets as required until the Server accepts" delete "as required"

-  4.12.1 "to indicate that more authentication data is required." -> "to indicate that more authentication data is needed."

2. should/SHOULD
- 3.2.2.2  and 3.14.2.1 (tables) rcs 156/157  should ->SHOULD




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