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Subject: Re: [oaxal-comment] Minor editorial comments on OAXAL Reference Model
Many Thanks Toby, You input is much appreciated. I will update the document accordingly. Best Regards, AZ Considine, Toby (Campus Services IT) wrote: > > Minor editing comments only: > > > > Page 3 > > The names "OASIS", [insert specific trademarked names, abbreviations, > etc. here] are trademarks > > Needs some elaboration > > > > 1.3 Random use of larger fonts > > > > 2.1 SCS inconsistently bolded > > > > > > The commenter is a member of the OASIS Technical Advisory Board (TAB) > > > > tc > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > "It is the theory that decides what can be observed." - Albert Einstein > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > Toby Considine > > Chair, OASIS oBIX Technical Committee > Co-Chair, OASIS Technical Advisory Board > Facilities Technology Office > University of North Carolina > Chapel Hill, NC > > > > > > > > Email: Toby.Considine@ unc.edu <mailto:Toby.Considine@fac.unc.edu> > Phone: (919)962-9073 > > http://www.oasis-open.org > > blog: www.NewDaedalus.com > > > > > -- email - azydron@xml-intl.com smail - c/o Mr. A.Zydron PO Box 2167 Gerrards Cross Bucks SL9 8XF United Kingdom Mobile +(44) 7966 477 181 FAX +(44) 1753 480 465 www - http://www.xml-intl.com This message contains confidential information and is intended only for the individual named. If you are not the named addressee you may not disseminate, distribute or copy this e-mail. Please notify the sender immediately by e-mail if you have received this e-mail by mistake and delete this e-mail from your system. E-mail transmission cannot be guaranteed to be secure or error-free as information could be intercepted, corrupted, lost, destroyed, arrive late or incomplete, or contain viruses. The sender therefore does not accept liability for any errors or omissions in the contents of this message which arise as a result of e-mail transmission. If verification is required please request a hard-copy version. Unless explicitly stated otherwise this message is provided for informational purposes only and should not be construed as a solicitation or offer.
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