OASIS Issues Tracker
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-10) Section 1 - Use four design points to introduce and link concepts throughout document, 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-11) Section 2 - Suggest examples follow through on each of four design points from section 1, making sure to use those four words (XML, Networking, Normalization, Foundation), 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-13) Section 2, Line 109 - It is stated that ". . . there are three element types." It is suggested that the three element types be listed at this point., 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-12) Section 2, Lines 114-115: "document" used to refer to multiple types of documents, needs clarification, 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-14) Section 2, Line 115 - "Child" has not been used up to this point in the document, and is used in line 115 without any explanation., 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-15) Section 2, Line 115 - It is stated that "There are three child objects for each of the thermostat's variables." Should it not say something like: "There are child objects to describe each of the three thermostat's variables.", 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-16) Section 2, Line 122 - It is suggested that it might be appropriate to introduce this section with the "Normalization" term used in section 1, so that the reader can follow through with the example using terms introduced in section 1., 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-19) Line 148, Line 161, Line 212 - Are words such as "slick", "cleverly", "nifty" appropriate words to use along with the connotations they imply?, 2013/09/03
- [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-21) Section 4 - While Figure 1 shows the supported attributes for each object type, the same attributes do not appear in the text., 2013/09/03
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