[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-10) Section 1 - Use four design points to introduce and link concepts throughout document

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Craig Gemmill  commented on OBIX-10:
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I somewhat agree with this.  We could reword it so that the existing concepts are named more directly in the four design points.

> Section 1 - Use four design points to introduce and link concepts throughout document
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>                 Key: OBIX-10
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-10
>             Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
>    Affects Versions: oBIX PR01
>         Environment: Ludo Bertsch, Horizon Technologies Inc. (250) 592-1488
> Representing CABA (Continental Automated Buildings Association)
>            Reporter: Toby Considine
>            Assignee: Toby Considine
>            Priority: Minor
>
>  In section 1, four design points - XML, Networking, Normalization and Foundation - were described.  It is suggested that throughout the document these words are used (with the same capitalization) to introduce these concepts and to link the concepts to the particular chapter.  For example, while Networking is clearly covered in Section 9, but it is not as clear for the other design points.

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