[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-33) Sections 1-2: Simple Editorial Comments
Sections 1-2: Simple Editorial Comments
---------------------------------------
Key: OBIX-33
URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-33
Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
Issue Type: Improvement
Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
Affects Versions: oBIX PR01
Environment: Toby Considine
Reporter: Toby Considine
Assignee: Toby Considine
Priority: Minor
Line 4: Eliminate "But Now"
Line 16: Information Model
Line 17: Principal Requirement language is not right for a spec. Consider "oBIX defines a common information model to represent diverse M2M systems and an interaction model for their communications." Change object model to information model throughout paragraph.
Section 1.1.2 Networking. SB: Interactions
Change paragraph to discuss encodings other than XML, and Bindings (which are not specified here). This specification should make no normative references to the encodings or to the bindings documents, but this paragraph should make it unambiguous how to assemble the specification we know and ones we don't for a specific implementation
Consider Moving 1.1.4 to follow section 1.1.1
Line 58-66: Move REST, SOAP, and Encodings to Non-Normative. *This* specification should require no normative reference to either. Consider replacing with references to CRUD
Add PNG (Portable Network Graphics) to the Normative References
Add URI (RFC 3986) to Normative References
--
This message is automatically generated by JIRA.
-
If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa
-
For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]