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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-198) Multiple locations, the use of the word "Concept" in this specification is nearly always in muddled expressions of intent
Multiple locations, the use of the word "Concept" in this specification is nearly always in muddled expressions of intent
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Key: OBIX-198
URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-198
Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
Issue Type: Bug
Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
Affects Versions: OBIX 1.1 XSD PR02
Environment: Toby Considine
Reporter: Toby Considine
Assignee: Toby Considine
Suggest searching for all occurrences and considering re-write for each. Instances of note include:
Section 4.1.1 Line 317: "Supports the concept of Null is awkward. Suggest "Any OBIX Objects may have the property Null."
Section 4.2: This Concept is... Suggest: "In object-oriented terms, the base OBIX Val Object is an abstract class, and the Val subtypes are concrete classes that inherit from that abstract class.
Line 1700: This is the normative definition of Point. Delete "The concept of"
Line 1703-1704: "The Goal" language is distracting. Suggest:
OBIX allows an integrator to normalize the representation of Points without forcing an impedance mismatch on implementers...
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