Next stage? It’s a Committee Spec. We considered our work on these specifications done.
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“It is the theory that decides what can be observed."
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Toby Considine
Phone: (919)962-9073
Information Technology Services
University of North Carolina
Chapel Hill, NC
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Email:
Toby.Considine@unc.edu
Chair, OASIS OBIX Technical Committee
Chair, OASIS WS-Calendar Technical Committee
Editor, OASIS EMIX, Energy Interoperation TC
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From: Chet Ensign [mailto:chet.ensign@oasis-open.org]
Sent: Wednesday, October 7, 2015 8:11 AM
To: Considine, Toby <Toby.Considine@unc.edu>
Cc: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>; obix@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [obix] Minor items noted during production of your CSs
Hi Toby -
Sorry. I guess I missed that in the ballot.
These are all minor changes from my perspective. They can just be updated when you move to your next stage.
On Tue, Oct 6, 2015 at 5:57 PM, Considine, Toby <Toby.Considine@unc.edu> wrote:
<sigh>
We had multiple conversations about the Namespace prior to public review. I’m glad they were found
now, and we asked the TC Admins to fix prior to publication. Authorization to do so was specifically authorized in our vote.
</sigh>
The encodings should all use the latest namespace. Again, as authorized in the vote.
COAP upgrade is a nice catch. If asked as requested, we would have moved from draft to final
Acme to example is an agreeable change. No Anvils required.
As you have now published before resolving, or perhaps did not do the checking before publishing final
review, we will need to make a vote on Non-significant corrections after the publication.
Would you advise on the proper procedures for that? DO we need another special majority vote?
tc
“It is the theory that decides what can be observed."
—Albert Einstein
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Toby Considine
Phone: (919)962-9073
Information Technology Services
University of North Carolina
Chapel Hill, NC
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Email:
Toby.Considine@unc.edu
Chair, OASIS OBIX Technical Committee
Chair, OASIS WS-Calendar Technical Committee
Editor, OASIS EMIX, Energy Interoperation TC
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From:
obix@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:obix@lists.oasis-open.org]
On Behalf Of Chet Ensign
Sent: Tuesday, October 6, 2015 5:25 PM
To: obix@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: Paul Knight <paul.knight@oasis-open.org>
Subject: [obix] Minor items noted during production of your CSs
While publishing your new Committee Specifications, we noted the following issues that you may wish to address at the next publication cycle.
The W3C link checker found a broken link to local resource hyperlinked to the word "OASIS" in the Non-Normative reference to "CamelCase". This should be removed.
Also, the links below are not broken, but the document does not use the exact URL, and the links are redirected. It may be a good idea to link to the final location, for the sake
of speed.
The link is missing a trailing slash, and caused a redirect. Adding the trailing slash would speed up browsing.
The link is also missing a trailing slash, and caused a redirect. Adding the trailing slash would speed up browsing.
- Encodings for OBIX: Common Encodings Version 1.0
The examples in Section 4.2 and 4.3 should not use "acme.com", which is a real website. Please replace them with
example.com, a url created for exactly this purpose.
- Bindings for OBIX: REST Bindings Version 1.0
In the Non-Normative references, the CoAP reference should cite the RFC instead of Internet draft.
The Pinger link check found a broken link for tje non-normative reference to CoAP-OBSERVE. It looks like the Internet draft cited has expired. The TC should update the reference.
- Bindings for OBIX: SOAP Bindings Version 1.0
Please let us know if you have any questions on these.
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