[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (ODATA-207) Rephrasing of section Requesting Delta Links in ODQP proposal page 2

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Michael Pizzo updated ODATA-207:
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       Proposal: 
Rewritten as suggested in version 1.3: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/odata/download.php/47996/OData%20Delta%20Query%20Protocol%20Design%202013-1-23.docx 


  was:Rewrite as suggested. 

    Environment: [Proposed]

> Rephrasing of section Requesting Delta Links in ODQP proposal page 2
> --------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: ODATA-207
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-207
>             Project: OASIS Open Data Protocol (OData) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>    Affects Versions: WD01
>         Environment: [Proposed]
>            Reporter: Stefan Drees
>            Assignee: Michael Pizzo
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: WD01
>
>
> Inside the current revision of the proposal for an OData Delta Query Protocol i.e. [OData Delta Query Protocol Design 2012-12-19.docx](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47755/OData%20Delta%20Query%20Protocol%20Design%202012-12-19.docx) please consider rewriting:
> """ 
> Requesting Delta Links
> An OData client may request that a service return delta links by including a Preference value of odata- request-deltas in the Prefer Header of the request. Services that support deltas should return a delta link, if possible for the request, but may ignore this value. Services may return delta links when this value has not been specified.
> """
> into:
> """
> Requesting Delta Links
> Services MAY return delta links. An OData client MAY request that a service return delta links by including a Preference value of odata- request-deltas in the Prefer Header of the request. Services that support deltas SHOULD return a delta link, if possible for such a request, but MAY ignore this value. """ 
> to ease understanding of main statements and extraction of conformance tests.

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