Re: [odata] Subminor tweak ... ?

[Stefan Drees <stefan@drees.name>]

After having received the OK from the TC admin, I have ensured the below 
wording is in the main 5 work products (where it not already had beend 
changed (CSDL) and where it was applicable (not in JSON format).

This is in the editor revisions on sky drive which will propagate 
through the next push by the editors to kavi.

All the best,
Stefan.
Am 01.05.13 10:23, schrieb Stefan Drees:
> May I suggest a last change to the Additional artifacts section intro
> (where applicable) so subminor I found no entry in the Priority list of
> JIRA :-?)
>
> "It" currently reads (eg. [OData Core Part 1: Protocol, Version
> 4.0](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/48963/odata-core-v4.0-wd01-part1-protocol-2013-4-26PR1.docx)):
>
> """
> This prose specification is one component of a Work Product which
> consists of:
> """
>
> MS Word nags me with suggesting to change "Product which" into either a)
> "Product, which" or b) "Product that" but not to use "Product which".
>
> My language feeling (ahem whatever that might be for a non-native
> English speaker) tells me, that in this case we should settle on
> "Product that", as it is a direct transitive claim further detailing the
> major fact, and not side stepping to some other "dimension" like in, say
> eg. "Peter owned a store, which he sold to Mary".
>
> What do the others think?
>
> Now back to the public holiday ;-)
>
> Stefan
>
>
>
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