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Subject: Re: [odf-adoption] Groups - ODF 1.2 Introduction and Overview (ODF1-2 Intro.odp) uploaded


Am 31.01.2011 23:01, schrieb donald_harbison@us.ibm.com:
> Please review and comment.

Slide 3: Iconic image on the left side doesn't fit.

Slide 6: Double negation (??)

Slide 7: Complicated and complex wording,
         double negation?
         "..is *not* - It is not a limitation... It is *not* being fully
implemented by Microsoft, although Office 2007 with SP2 is a good start!"
--> Office 2010 (?)
--> = it's supported and the implementation is getting more complete (?)

Slive 11: Delete ", for example", add item "* ..."

Slide 13: "Interop"

          "Better interop, especially in a word [?] of promiscuous
mashups, not monolithic silos"

          Trim down bulleted items, strongest argument first,
          delete e.g.: "Can leverage existing community expertise"

Slide 17: Relevance?

Slide 19: (8) implementation of ODF -> (8) ?

Slide 21: delete "We have"
          Opportunity --> Solution?
          "Create an ODF API that exposes a higher level abstraction of
ODF to application developers" --> redundant when listeners know the
term API.
          "so they can quickly become productive with ODF processing
without having to master a >700 page specification." --> delete, see
left side.

Slide 25 What do you want to say here?


Best regards
AR



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