Some remarks ...

[Frank Meies <frank.meies@oracle.com>]

Hi,

let me add some remarks on the current proposal:

1) Although the examples given in the proposal are quite telling, the 
new elements/attributes and their usage need some more prose to explain 
their purpose.

2) The relationship between the current ODF elements and the new 
elements/attributes needs to be clarified, e.g., is it allowed to have 
the change tracking elements in the auto styles section? Or can 
'delta:merge' be the child of a 'text:p' element?

3) I think we can improve the (human) readability of the text content by 
moving the deleted text out off the 'regular' content (see current ODF 
specification) into the tracked changes section. Additionally the 
attribute change information for attribute removal and modification can 
be moved into the tracked changes section as well to reduce some noise 
in the text content.

4) I think the generated attributes 'split:XXX' can be replaced by a 
non-generated attribute 'delta:split' whose value would be a list of the 
respective split ids. The same holds for 'ac:XXX'.

Best regards,

-Frank

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