Re: [office-comment] Fw: [jodf 216] Error report from Enomoto-san

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Makoto,

Thanks for the errata.

I will be adding these to the list.

We are trying to get a fairly complete list since we can only do two
errata documents a year per standard in OASIS. So I would rather make
the errata document more rather than less complete.

Hope you are at the start of a great week!

Patrick

MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given) wrote:

>Forwarded by "MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given)" <eb2m-mrt@asahi-net.or.jp>
>----------------------- Original Message -----------------------
> From:    Yoshihiko Enomoto <YENOMOTO@jp.ibm.com>
> To:      jodf@itscj.ipsj.or.jp (jodf ML)
> Date:    Mon, 28 May 2007 13:41:24 +0900
>----
>
>1) Section 8.11.7
>Current description: 
>The <table:change-deletion> element specified the id of a previously 
>tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.
>Proposal:
>"specified" should read "specifies" as follows:
>The <table:change-deletion> element specifies the id of a previously
>　tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.
>
>2) Section 8.11.8, 2nd line on page 259
>Current description:
>Depending on the deletion type, It is either the number of a row, a column 
>or a table.
>Proposal: "It" should be "it" as follows: 
>Depending on the deletion type, it is either the number of a row, a column 
>or a table.
>
>3) Section 8.11.14, 8th line on page 264
>Current description:
>The change track table cells additionally supports the attributes 
>table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned, 
>table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value, 
>office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described 
>in section 8.1.3.
>Proposal:
>"cells" should be the singular form "cell" as follows:
>The change track table cell additionally supports the attributes 
>table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned, 
>table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value, 
>office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described 
>in section 8.1.3.
>
>4) Section 9.1.4, 12th line on page 271
>Current description:
>The word "borders" is a keyword in the following sentence: 
>Defines properties such as the size and borders of the drawing page
>Proposal:
>The word "borders" shouldn't be akey word.
>
>5) Section 9.1.5, Example: Drawing page on 273
>Current descripton:
><draw:rect .../>
>presentation:notes>
>        <draw:text ...>this is a note</draw:text>
></presentation:notes>
>Proposal:
>presentaion:notes should be delineated by angle brackets as follows:
><draw:rect .../>
><presentation:notes>
>        <draw:text ...>this is a note</draw:text>
></presentation:notes>
>
>6) Section 9.2.5, 5th line on page 278
>Current description:
>In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the 
>inner corners a located on a ellipse that's radius is r(100-s)/100.
>Proposal: Please check if the following is the intended description: 
>In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the 
>inner corners are located on an ellipse whose radius is r(100-s)/100.
>
>
>YENOMOTO@jp.ibm.com
>
>--------------------- Original Message Ends --------------------
>
>Makoto <EB2M-MRT@asahi-net.or.jp>
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