4.1 Question of style?

[Patrick Durusau <Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org>]

Greetings,

The second paragraph of 4.1 reads:

> The XML elements that represent both headings and paragraphs are
> called paragraph elements. All text content in an Open Office XML file
> must be contained in either of these elements.

I understand what is meant but the reference in the second sentence to 
"either of these elements" seems to be confusing. At this point, it has 
not be said what those elements are.

While not suggesting the following is the best option, something along 
the lines of:

"The elements <text-h> and <text-p> represent headings and paragraphs, 
respectively, and are collectively referred to as paragraph elements. 
All text content in an Open Office XML file must be contained in either 
of these two elements."

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature
Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org
Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!