Re: [office] 4.1 Question of style?

[Michael Brauer <michael.brauer@sun.com>]

Hi Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> The second paragraph of 4.1 reads:
> 
>> The XML elements that represent both headings and paragraphs are
>> called paragraph elements. All text content in an Open Office XML file
>> must be contained in either of these elements.
> 
> 
> I understand what is meant but the reference in the second sentence to 
> "either of these elements" seems to be confusing. At this point, it has 
> not be said what those elements are.
> 
> While not suggesting the following is the best option, something along 
> the lines of:
> 
> "The elements <text-h> and <text-p> represent headings and paragraphs, 
> respectively, and are collectively referred to as paragraph elements. 
> All text content in an Open Office XML file must be contained in either 
> of these two elements."

Your suggestions sounds much better and less confusing than the sentence 
we had in the spec. I've changed it.
> 
> Hope everyone is having a great day!
> 
> Patrick
> 

Thanks

Michael

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