Re: [office] 4.4 Sections

[Michael Brauer <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>]

Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> The sixth paragraph of this section (and first sentence of paragraph 
> seven) read:
> 
> Sections support two ways of linking to external content. The linking 
> information is contained in the section element's first child contains 
> in formation about the source of this element. Additionally, the section 
> contains the full representation of the data source, so that processors 
> need to understand the section source element only if they wish to 
> update the contents.
> 
> If a section is linked to another document, the link can be through one 
> of the following:
> 
> Comment: Note in formation -> information
> 
> Also note that while the paragraph starts talking about two ways to link 
> to external content, it drops that to talk about where the linking 
> information is held and then continues with a description of the result 
> of linking.
> 
> Suggest:
> 
> Sections support two ways of linking to external content. If a section 
> is linked to another document, the link can be through one of the following:
> 
> (insert the list here, then follow with a new paragraph)
> 
> Linking information for external content is contained in the section 
> element's first child. A section that links to external content contains 
> the full representation of the data source, so that processors need to 
> understand the linking information only if they wish to update the 
> contents of the section.

I've changed that spec as suggested by you.

Thanks

Michael