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Subject: Re: [office] "you can"
Tom, Tom Magliery wrote: > hello all, > > i have rewritten all occurrences *except one* of the words "you" and > "your" from chapters 1 through 10 of the spec (working from michael's > newer draft from yesterday). this includes not only "you can" but also > a few scattered others. i'll send the revised document straight to > michael because i don't know if i can upload a draft myself. Thanks for the editing work. I will continue with chapter 11 and will upload the resulting darft by the end of the day. > > the one occurrence i did not change -- but we should -- is at the bottom > of page 370. i think my brain is too addled this late in the day to > figure out a reasonable rewording of this paragraph. maybe i'll be able > to think more clearly later, or maybe someone else can beat me to it. I assume you are talking about the section "Defining Axes", at least, this section contains "you". I will try to find a business chart expert today that can help me to rewrite that section. > > i will probably not be in the office tomorrow, but i can pick up again > wherever things are left off on friday. > > mag > > > Michael
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