Re: [office] "you can"

[Michael Brauer <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>]

Hi Tom, all,

I've continued with rewriting the "you can" sentences. They should be
rewritten upto section 15.11.1 now. I've marked all changes that were
not trivial with a yellow background color. I've also changed the title
to draft 20. The draft is at

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.php/10258/office-spec.sxw

I've also rewritten the "Defining Axes" section. In fact, it turned out
that most of this section was obsolete, because it explained the usage
of the "chart:axis-class" attribute that has been replaced by the
"chart:dimension" attribute that needs much less explanation. I've moved
everything that was not obsolete into the description of the
"chart:dimension" attribute. The only exception is the example, that I
kept were it was. Since I've noticed that the example itself was wrong
as well (it described the "chart:axis-class" attribute), I've adapted it
as well.

In addition to these changes, I've integrated the statistics proposal we
agreed on Monday.

Tom, I will not be able to do any additional editing before Monday, so
if you have some time left for editing, you may take the draft.

Michael


Michael Brauer wrote:
> Hi Tom ,all.
> 
> Tom Magliery wrote:
> 
> 
>>hello all,
>>
>>i have rewritten all occurrences *except one* of the words "you" and
>>"your" from chapters 1 through 10 of the spec (working from michael's
>>newer draft from yesterday).  this includes not only "you can" but also
>>a few scattered others.  i'll send the revised document straight to
>>michael because i don't know if i can upload a draft myself.
> 
> 
> I have continued with chapter 11 and I'm now somewhere in chapter 15. I
> have replaced:
> 
> 
> "You can use this attribute with" (the following elements)
> -> "This attribute is supported for" (the following elements)
> 
> "You can use the following elements with"
> -> "The following elements may be contained in"
> 
> I've also replaced many other occurencies of "you". Unfortunately I'm
> not able to upload the document, because I don't get a connection to the
> OASIS member page. I will try again tomorrow.
> 
> Tom, I know you probably will not be in the office today, but I will
> send you the document anyway, just to make sure you have it.
> 
> Michael
> 
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