Re: [Fwd: [office-comment] Editorial comments OpenDocument-v1.2-draft7-12.odt,chapter 1-8]

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Michael,

Yes, I have seen it but an extra copy never hurts!

Hope you are having a great day!

Patrick

Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg wrote:
> Patrick,
>
> I'm sure you have seen this, but I'm forwarding this mail to make sure 
> it is not overseen.
>
> Michael
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: [office-comment] Editorial comments 
> OpenDocument-v1.2-draft7-12.odt, chapter 1-8
> Date: Wed, 10 Dec 2008 14:06:02 +0100
> From: Hanssens Bart <Bart.Hanssens@fedict.be>
> To: ODF Comments List <office-comment@lists.oasis-open.org>
>
> Hi,
>
>
> A few editorial remarks on the latest draft
>
>
> * Status, p2
> - Missing closing ")" after the link to ...ipr.php
> - "above guidance", shouldn't that read "additional guidance" ?
>
>
> * Notices, p4
> Hyperlink to ...trademark.php is not clickable
>
>
> * Table of contents, p71
> - (using OOo3): some page numbers at the end of the TOC aren't clickable
> - there's something wrong with the numbering of the appendices: after
> Appendix D (core features) the numbering is reset and the next one is (a
> second) Appendix A
>
>
> * 2.3 <office:meta> meta-data, p79
> "See ref-manifest.rdf." should be a clickable reference (to 3.2.2 ?)
>
>
> * 2.6 Cursor Position Setting, note1, p83
> "the position where the text cursor was while...", perhaps "the position
> of the text cursor" is easier to read
> "could be also", perhaps "could also be" is easier to read
>
>
> * 2.7 Office:scripts, p84
> "some events are called after immediately...", it might be better to say
> "some events are triggered" or "some event handlers/listeners can be
> called..."
>
> * 3.2.1 General, p87
> " ref-rdfa:about, ref-rdfa:property, ref-rdfa:content, and
> ref-rdfa:datatype." Should be clickable references
>
>
> * 3.2.2.6 odfElement, p88
> "it's XML Namespace and it's XML local name" should read "its... its"
>
>
> * 3.5.15 <dc:language>, p93
> "from the ISO 639... from the ISO 3166", should both be clickable
> references
>
>
> * 4.5 <text:tracked-changes>, p102
> "If the <text:traced-changes> element", typo, "k" missing so it should
> read "..tracked-"
>
>
> * 4.5.3 <text:insertion>, p102
> "and the date of that change". Shouldn't this be "timestamp of that
> change" ? Same remark for 4.5.4
>
>
> * 5.1 Basic Text Content, p107
> Bullet "annotation", make it plural "annotations", like "foot and end
> notes" ?
>
>
> * 6.3.2 <text:date>, p119
> "The <text:date> element represents a date field that displays the
> current date. The date can be adjusted to display a date other than the
> current date."
> Probably better to align this to the text of 6.3.3 <text:time>, so it
> should read:
> "This element contains the presentation of the date field value,
> depending on the data style specified. The default time is the current
> date."
>
>
> * 6.3.6.15 <text:sender-country>, p123
> "represents the country of the address of a sender.", might be better to
> specify "the name of the country..." (or is it a country code ?)
>
>
> * 6.4.15 <text:text-input>, p130
> "does not change the value of any variables" should read "...variable" ?
>
> * 7.2.3 <text:index-title>, p150
> "element is contains ..." remove "is"
>
> * 7.8.2 <text:alphabetical-index-auto-mark-file>, p156
> "The declaration element in an XLink," should this be "contains an
> XLink" ?
>
> * 8.1.4 <table:covered-table-cell> note, p164
> "that spans multiple columns and roles." Should probably read "...and
> rows"
>
> * 8.4.2 <table:content-validations>, p171
> "The  table:content-validations>", opening "<" is missing
>
> * 8.6.1, General, p177
> "...render portions of table invisible." should either read "portions of
> tables" or "portions of a table" ?
>
> * 8.6.5 <table:filter-condition>, p178
> "ref-attribute-table:operator, ref-attribute-table:value,
> ref-attribute-table:data-type, respectively" should be clickable
> references, same remark for "ref-element-table:filter-set-item"
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Bart
>
>
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Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)