Subject: work product review
The following issues have been idientified in the submitted work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org and the public review announced: 1 Specification Title: add space following close parens; spell out 'Version' 2. Status: add space between 'Draft' and '1'. Remove comma 3. Date: this must be on a separate line 4. Specification URIs: This Version: Needs to point to a location on docs.oasis-open.org; all 3 formats, and one of the three declared authoritative Latest Version: similarly, needs to point to the generic location on docs.oasis-open.org that will retrieve latest version of specs in all 3 formats Latest Approved Version: REMOVE; this is no longer part of the template 5. Committee name: Committee name needs to be hypertext-linked to the public TC home page 6. Add hypertext link for related work 7. OASIS namespaces must be on the cover 8. Footer: remove file extension from document identifier Remove period following date (19.) 9. Conformance section must be the last-numbered section immediately preceding any appendices. 10. Acknowledgements: the following people are Associate Members and their company affiliation cannot be listed - either just list the name, or follow with "Associate" Manual Cano Ezer Farhi David Faure David Pawson David Wheeler Regards, Mary Mary P McRae Director, Standards Development Technical Committee Administrator OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society email: firstname.lastname@example.org web: www.oasis-open.org twitter: fiberartisan #oasisopen phone: 1.603.232.9090 Standards are like parachutes: they work best when they're open.