work product review

[Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

The following issues have been idientified in the submitted work  
products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org 
  and the public review announced:

1 Specification Title: add space following close parens; spell out  
'Version'

2. Status: add space between 'Draft' and '1'. Remove comma

3. Date: this must be on a separate line

4. Specification URIs:
This Version: Needs to point to a location on docs.oasis-open.org; all  
3 formats, and one of the three declared authoritative
Latest Version: similarly, needs to point to the generic location on docs.oasis-open.org 
  that will retrieve latest version of specs in all 3 formats
Latest Approved Version: REMOVE; this is no longer part of the template

5. Committee name: Committee name needs to be hypertext-linked to the  
public TC home page

6. Add hypertext link for related work

7. OASIS namespaces must be on the cover

8. Footer: remove file extension from document identifier
Remove period following date (19.)

9. Conformance section must be the last-numbered section immediately  
preceding any appendices.

10. Acknowledgements: the following people are Associate Members and  
their company affiliation cannot be listed - either just list the  
name, or follow with "Associate"

Manual Cano
Ezer Farhi
David Faure
David Pawson
David Wheeler


Regards,

Mary

Mary P McRae
Director, Standards Development
Technical Committee Administrator
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
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