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Subject: Re: [office] Groups - OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt uploaded

Hi Patrick,

The following notes are not intended to be a reason to postpone a committee draft, therefore I do not create an issue. If we stop on each typo, we will never get a new version. It is not possible to make an error free text of such length. Only the different version numbers should be clarified, because that hits automatic validation.

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item 4.11 Does element <PGPData> contain something related to signatures?

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item, The schema has value "1.3", the text value "1.2".

The Working Draft number is not consistent: 07 in Title, wd06 in footer and wd09 in file name.

Pages 6 and 7
{Schneier-Errata] either Normative or Non-Normative

Page 8
Suspicious [RNG] in item E)

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item 4.8, The e in encrypted-key is not part of the "element" character style.
item 4.9, The word 'element' should have default character style.

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item 4.12, The words 'element contains' should have default character style.
item 4.13, The word 'element' should have default character style.

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item 4.14, 4.15 It is not good to have in both cases the word 'contains'. In case of CipherValue 'contains' is correct, because the raw encrypted data are the direct content of the element. But in case of CipherData the encrypted data is not the direct content. [xmldsig-core1] has the wording 'envelopes' in that case.

Inconsistent use with base64, 'a base64Binary sequence' (4.12) or 'a base64-encoded' (4.13) or 'in BASE64 encoding' (4.16.2, 4.16.5) or 'encoded as base64binary' (4.16.12)

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item 4.16.7, The second 'For a ' should be aligned with the first one.

Kind regards

Patrick Durusau schrieb am 07-Aug-19 um 03:58:
/Submitter's message/

Apologies for the delay but the light finally came on for the PGP encryption element additions. Not nearly as difficult as I thought it would be.

I will post a clean version tomorrow with a view of preparing for a vote on a committee draft.

Hope everyone is having a great week!

-- Patrick Durusau
*Document Name*: OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/document.php?document_id=65742>
All issues applied.
Download Latest Revision <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.php/65742/latest/OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt> Public Download Link <https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=65742&wg_abbrev=office>
*Submitter*: Patrick Durusau
*Group*: OASIS Open Document Format for Office Applications (OpenDocument) TC
*Folder*: 1.3 Drafts
*Date submitted*: 2019-08-06 18:57:46

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