Re: [office] Groups - OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt uploaded

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Greetings,

Will note this tomorrow but prepping part 2 and:

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Inconsistent use with base64, 'a base64Binary sequence' (4.12) or 'a
base64-encoded' (4.13) or 'in BASE64 encoding' (4.16.2, 4.16.5) or
'encoded as base64binary' (4.16.12)

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base64Binary is a built-in data type of XML, so for consistency:

4.12 -> a base64Binary sequence

4.13 -> a base64Binary encoded

4.16.2 -> in a base64Binary encoding

4.16.5 -> in a base64Binary encoded sequence (deleting binary as redundant)

4.16.12 -> as a base64Binary value (adding value and correcting case in
the name of the datatype)

Hope everyone is having a great weekend!

Patrick

On 8/9/19 6:11 PM, Regina Henschel wrote:
> Hi Patrick,
>
> The following notes are not intended to be a reason to postpone a
> committee draft, therefore I do not create an issue. If we stop on
> each typo, we will never get a new version. It is not possible to make
> an error free text of such length.
> Only the different version numbers should be clarified, because that
> hits automatic validation.
>
> content
> --------
> Page 15
> item 4.11 Does element <PGPData> contain something related to signatures?
>
> Page 20
> item 4.16.14.3, The schema has value "1.3", the text value "1.2".
>
>
> editorial
> ---------
> The Working Draft number is not consistent: 07 in Title, wd06 in
> footer and wd09 in file name.
>
> Pages 6 and 7
> {Schneier-Errata] either Normative or Non-Normative
>
> Page 8
> Suspicious [RNG] in item E)
>
> Page 15
> item 4.8, The e in encrypted-key is not part of the "element"
> character style.
> item 4.9, The word 'element' should have default character style.
>
> Page 16
> item 4.12, The words 'element contains' should have default character
> style.
> item 4.13, The word 'element' should have default character style.
>
> Page 16
> item 4.14, 4.15 It is not good to have in both cases the word
> 'contains'. In case of CipherValue 'contains' is correct, because the
> raw encrypted data are the direct content of the element. But in case
> of CipherData the encrypted data is not the direct content.
> [xmldsig-core1] has the wording 'envelopes' in that case.
>
> Inconsistent use with base64, 'a base64Binary sequence' (4.12) or 'a
> base64-encoded' (4.13) or 'in BASE64 encoding' (4.16.2, 4.16.5) or
> 'encoded as base64binary' (4.16.12)
>
> Page 18
> item 4.16.7, The second 'For a ' should be aligned with the first one.
>
>
> Kind regards
> Regina
>
>
>
>
> Patrick Durusau schrieb am 07-Aug-19 um 03:58:
>> /Submitter's message/
>> Greetings!
>>
>> Apologies for the delay but the light finally came on for the PGP
>> encryption element additions. Not nearly as difficult as I thought it
>> would be.
>>
>> I will post a clean version tomorrow with a view of preparing for a
>> vote on a committee draft.
>>
>> Hope everyone is having a great week!
>>
>> Patrick
>> -- Patrick Durusau
>> *Document Name*: OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt
>> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/document.php?document_id=65742>
>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>> *Description*
>> All issues applied.
>> Download Latest Revision
>> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.php/65742/latest/OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt>
>> Public Download Link
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>> *Submitter*: Patrick Durusau
>> *Group*: OASIS Open Document Format for Office Applications
>> (OpenDocument) TC
>> *Folder*: 1.3 Drafts
>> *Date submitted*: 2019-08-06 18:57:46
>>
>
-- 
Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)

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