Re: [oslc-core] Review of OSLC Resource Shape 3

["Jim Amsden" <jamsden@us.ibm.com>]

Jad,
Thank you for the review, it is much
appreciated, especially from a new member. My comments are in the attached
document.

Some items that need further discussion:

1. ResourceShapes doesn't specify any
oslc:range properties for its own shapes. Were these left out for a reason,
or should we add them?


Jim Amsden, Senior Technical Staff Member
OSLC and Linked Lifecycle Data
919-525-6575




From:      
 Jad El-Khoury <jad@kth.se>
To:      
 "oslc-core@lists.oasis-open.org"
<oslc-core@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:      
 01/29/2016 02:48 AM
Subject:    
   [oslc-core]
Review of OSLC Resource Shape 3
Sent by:    
   <oslc-core@lists.oasis-open.org>

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Hi,
 
Attached are some review comments on the
“OSLC Resource Shape 3” specification. I hope it is convenient to deal
with comments in PDF.
 
I have commented on many small details.
I was in the process of making sense of the document as a first-time reader,
so might as well share my thoughts as such. The more significant comments
are in orange.
 
regards
______________________________
Jad El-khoury, PhD
KTH Royal Institute of Technology
School of Industrial Engineering and Management,
Mechatronics Division
Brinellvägen 83, SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden
Phone: +46(0)8 790 6877 Mobile: +46(0)70
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jad@kth.se,
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