Fwd: review comments of CS02

[åçèä <yoshida_hiroyuki@nifty.com>]

To PROMCODE TC,
I did one more review of CS02 and found the following problems that need 
fix. All of them are minor and of editorial nature.

Hiroyuki Yoshida (Individual Member)
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Document reviewed:
OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 1: Specification 
https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-spec.html

1. Introduction
1.2 Goal and Solution
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]

3. Terminology
Project
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]

Project Management
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]

4. PROMCODE Domain Model Specification
4.1 Domain Model
4.1.1 ScopeItem
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained ScopeItem entities -> finer-grained 
ScopeItem entities
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a coarse grained ScopeItemãentity -> a coarse-grained 
ScopeItem entity
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a set of finer grained ScopeItem entities -> a set of 
finer-grained ScopeItem entities

4.1.2 WorkItem
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a finer grained activity -> a finer-grained activity
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A coarse grained WorkItem entity -> A coarse-grained 
WorkItem entity
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained WorkItem entities -> finer-grained WorkItem 
entities
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ a set of fine grained WorkItem entities -> a set of 
fine-grained WorkItem entities

4.1.3 Artifact
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact 
entities
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A coarse grained Artifact entity -> A coarse-grained 
Artifact entity
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact 
entities

4.1.6 ManagedItem
Attributes
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a 
blank character after String)

4.1.8 Report
Links
correspondsTo: Plan [0 .. 1]
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ the Report entity is created to link to the new Plan 
entity -> a Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity

4.1.11 ManagedItemCollection
Attributes
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a 
blank character after String)

4.1.14 Project
Attributes
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1] (put a 
blank character after String)

Links
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit[0 .. 1] -> unitOfScopeItemSize: 
Unit [0 .. 1]ÂÂ (put a blank character after Unit)

4.2.2 Applying Quality Management
Table 2 Example of Quality Management Table
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ Line of Code -> Lines of Code

ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ Artifact, and Measure -> Artifact, Measure, and Measurement

Appendix C. References
C.2 Informative references
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ <a href="http://www.pmi.org/";> -> <a href=" 
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/";>
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ A Guide to Project Management Body of Knowledge, 5th ed. 
-> A Guide to the Project Management Body of Knowledge
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ <a href="http://www.pmi.org/";> -> <a href=" 
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/";>
ÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂÂ http://www.pmi.org/Â; -> 
https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/

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