Re: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062

John

On Jul 9, 2015, at 9:58 AM, Gail Magnuson <gail.magnuson@gmail.com> wrote:

John,

Great job!

Attached are my minor edits.

I have one question. Is Jamie taking the line by line comments which I edited and sent to you and Jamie and putting them into the spread sheet for submission along with this document?

Best, Gail

On Mon, Jul 6, 2015 at 7:36 AM, John Sabo <john.annapolis@comcast.net> wrote:
TC Members:

Attached is the updated revision of comments on the NISTIR 8062 that we have been discussing. I tried to integrate comments as best I could, but that is always challenging so I ask the major contributors (Gail Magnuson, Mike Davis, Nico Notario, Antonio Kung) to review carefully to ensure I captured your main issues. There is a certain amount of repetitiveness and overlap, but I don't have the cycles to do another major edit for readability.

Our response to the NISTIR is due by July 13, so I will need TC member comments on this draft by Friday, July 10 so they can be formatted and transmitted by the due date.

Dawn, as chair of the PbD-SE TC, I will need your approval to include your TC in our submission.

Best regards,

John

John Sabo, CISSP
Chair, PMRM TC

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