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Subject: Re: [pki-survey] Final draft follow-up survey
It's important for respondents to quickly understand what each item means. I guess it might help to add a few example protocols. How about "(such as S/MIME or SSL)", since those are probably the two most commonly used protocols that use PKI? This doesn't seem too leading to me. I don't think the respondent will be more or less likely to choose that item if we include this explanation. Thanks, Steve Sharon Boeyen wrote: > > Steve, I agree with all of your suggestions. On the "protocols that > use PKI" would it be a good idea to add an "e.g. S/MIME" or do you > think that would be too leading? > > -----Original Message----- > From: Steve Hanna [mailto:steve.hanna@sun.com] > Sent: Tuesday, August 05, 2003 5:05 PM > To: Sharon Boeyen > Cc: PKI TC Survey SC > Subject: Re: [pki-survey] Final draft follow-up survey > > Thanks for the review, Sharon. My comments are below. > > Sharon Boeyen wrote: > > I have no comments on the email text - I think it's perfect. > > Good! > > > Just a couple of minor comments on the survey itself: > > > > 1 - In the privacy statement it says "If you choose to > > provide your email address..." but they really don't have > > a choice do they? Question 1 requires that they supply it. > > Suggest rewording the privacy statement to say "If you choose > > to complete this survey (note that this requires supplying > > your email address)... > > Good point. I'll make this change. > > > 2 - In question 2 I'm wondering if the "(generally not > > legally binding)" could be changed to something like "(generally > > no specific legal significance)". I'm thinking of things like > > expense claims for business travel or other forms signed within > > your own company for example. Your employment contract may make > > these legally binding but they are different than signing contracts > > for example. I like the "legally binding" for that category but > > think the "not" may be a bit misleading in the signing electronic > > forms case. > > I see what you mean. The phrase "generally no specific legal > significance" is long and a bit lawyerly, though. How about > moving Signing Contracts to the front (since that's short > and clear) and changing the parenthetical comment for Signing > Electronic Forms to "(not legal agreements)" or "(not contracts)"? > > > 3 - In the text just before question 3, where you describe the > > points system it might be helpful to add another sentence at the > > end of the first paragraph to make sure people understand that > > they don't need to distribute the points among all items, only to > > those of importance to them. Something along these lines "Note that you are > > free to allocate the points as you see fit and there is no need > > to allocate points to each item, only to those you feel are > > important. For example all 10 points could be allocated to a single item > > if you feel that reflects the relative importance." might work, but > > I'm flexible on the text itself. Just want to make sure they understand > > the flexibility. > > OK. I'll make a change for this. > > > 4 - In 7a, I suggest adding another item to the list (probably fits > > in between certificate revocation and smart card). The item is > > path validation. > > That's a good one. It's pretty specific. > > I think the three items that start with Application are > too vague. Respondents will have trouble knowing what they > mean and we'll have trouble knowing what to do if they > are ranked high. Maybe we should change them to: > > Protocols that use PKI > [formerly Application-Server and Application-Application] > > Unusual Certificate Contents > [formerly Application-Certificate] > > > 5 - In question 8, first paragraph. It might be good to add a sentence > > to the end of this paragraph indicating that we still have the comments > > they provided in the first survey so they need not repeat those, but any > > additional thoughts would be welcome here. > > There is a note about that later in question 8. > I'll move it to the end of the first paragraph. > > > Sorry I've taken so long to respond - just been swamped :-) > > That's OK. I was worried we would miss our August 11 > startup date. But the OASIS staff is moving quickly. > I should have a prototype survey for you to try by > Thursday at the latest. > > Thanks, > > Steve
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