Re: [pbd-se] Revised Draft Comments on NISTIR 8062 - Comments Needed by July 10

[John Sabo <john.annapolis@comcast.net>]

Gail,

Thank you.  You help and input are most appreciated.  

Given time constraints and the unwieldy spreadsheet format, Jamie suggested sending line by line comments using the matrix and the narrative comments in an accompanying word document. I'll work on this on my return flight tomorrow from the OASIS event here in London.

Best,

John

On Jul 9, 2015, at 9:58 AM, Gail Magnuson <gail.magnuson@gmail.com> wrote:

John, 

Great job! 

Attached are my minor edits. 

I have one question. Is Jamie taking the line by line comments which I edited and sent to you and Jamie and putting them into the spread sheet for submission along with this document?

Best, Gail

On Mon, Jul 6, 2015 at 7:36 AM, John Sabo <john.annapolis@comcast.net> wrote:

TC Members:

Attached is the updated revision of comments on the NISTIR 8062 that we have been discussing.  I tried to integrate comments as best I could, but that is always challenging so I ask the major contributors (Gail Magnuson, Mike Davis, Nico Notario, Antonio Kung) to review carefully to ensure I captured your main issues.  There is a certain amount of repetitiveness and overlap, but I don't have the cycles to do another major edit for readability.

Our response to the NISTIR is due by July 13,  so I will need TC member comments on this draft by Friday, July 10 so they can be formatted and transmitted by the due date.

Dawn,  as chair of the PbD-SE TC, I will need your approval to include your TC in our submission.

Best regards,

John

John Sabo, CISSP
Chair, PMRM TC









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