Comments for SPML Specification and Binding Drafts

["Fernandez, Jesus J" <Jesus.Fernandez@ca.com>]

Title: Comments for SPML Specification and Binding Drafts

Hi,

Comments for SPML bindings draft:
1) Section 2.1.1.1, the table in line 68 is showing "deleteRequest"as SPML Respond (second column)  instead "deleteResponse".

Comments for SPML specification draft:
1) Line 169: Why Introduction section starts on 5 instead 1.
2) Line 404: it refers to section 6 but it seems to be the wrong section.
3) Line 415: "isone" must be break it onto two words "is one".
4) Line 460: the addResponse picture shows
<spml:identifierType = "urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#EMailAddress">
they should be separated
<spml:identifier type = "urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#EMailAddress">
5) Line 608: missing SAML subject sample.
6) Line 757: several erros in the the sample:
- missing "spml:" in
<providerIdentifier providerIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#URN"> should be
        <providerID>urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML</spml:providerID>
- this
<spmlIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">
should be
<schemaIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">
7) Line 782: several errors in the sample:
- this
<spml:providerID>1.3.6.1.4.868.2.4.1.2.1.1.1.3.3562</providerID>
should be
<spml:providerID>1.3.6.1.4.868.2.4.1.2.1.1.1.3.3562</spml:providerID>
- this
<spmlIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">
should be
<schemaIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">
8) Line 859: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.
9) Line 864: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.
10) Line 873: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.
11) Line 893: There is an "=" that should not be there in first line of sample. Not sure if make sense to have a requestID for this sample since this is a synchronous request.

12) Line 897: Not sure if make sense to have a requestID for this sample since this is a synchronous request.
13) Line 902: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.
14) Line 907: Missing a "spml:" in the sample.
15) Line 913: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.
16) Line 919: Missing several "spml:" in the sample. Also, "spml:AddResponse" should be "spml:addResponse"
17) Line 1014: At tne end of line "SpmlRequsest" should be "SpmlRequest"
18) Line 1133: The first column second row of the table shows "paralell" and it shoul be "exit".
19) Line 1423: "PDP" should read "PSP"

Thanks,

Jesus Fernandez
Computer Associates
Programmer
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fax: +1 203 937-3015
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