Re: [provision] Comments on draft 8...

[Gary P Cole <Gary.P.Cole@Sun.COM>]

Bohren, Jeffrey wrote:

> 2.1.3.1 – I would like to change the title from “Schema” to 
> “Provisioning Schema”. Also everywhere we talk about the schema for a 
> target, we should use the term “Target Provisioning Schema” or 
> “Provisioning Schema” as appropriate. This will help alleviate the 
> problem that the term schema is used for so many purposes.
>
I'll track this as spec issue #33. I'll reply in a separate email to 
discuss.

> 2.1.3.3. – The title should be “Capabilities”.
>
Done (spec issue #34).

> 3.1.3 – There seem to be two blank images in this section (at least in 
> my copy).
>
In MSWORD, from the "View" menu select "Print Layout".

> 3.1.3.1 –Error in title, should be “Execution Mode Attribute”
>
#36. Gee, "error" seems a little strong. After all, the attribute in 
question *is* named "executionMode". Do you still think that we should 
change the title?

>
> 3.1.3.2 – We should spell out “asynchronous” except when refering to 
> an XML element or attribute
>
#37. I thought I did spell out "asynchronous" everwhere except "Async 
Capability" (which I believe is the formal name of the capability). What 
else did you notice?

> 3.2.3 – *Caution: PSOIdentifier is mutable *should be: *Caution: PSO 
> Identifier is mutable* and *Recommend immutable PSOIdentifier* should 
> be *Recommend immutable PSO Identifier.*
>
Done (#38).