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Subject: Re: [regrep] Couple comments on specs
Hi Kathryn, Thanks for the comments. I have addressed all of them in regrep-3.0-draft-02 versions that are under development. Thanks. PS: Reminder to TC members that if you are like me you may have the regrep TC con call in your calendar programs. Since the schedule has shifted by a week please remember to update your entries so it does not forget to remind you of our concall today at 8AM PT. Thanks. Breininger, Kathryn R wrote: >Please list my affiliation as The Boeing Company (official name) on both >specs. > >I believe the colons in the titles of the specs should be removed. The >titles in the past versions have not had a colon and subtitle, and make >more sense as complete titles ("ebXML Registry Information Model" and >"ebXML Registry Services and Protocols"). Additionally, these specs >have been referred to RIM and RS, and putting in the colon breaks the >titles in two so these acronyms do not make as much sense (now it would >be S&P and IM?). In general, you want to avoid subtitles when a >complete title is clear and makes sense. > >In RIM document: >Line 309 - consider changing "object" to "asset" so that this does not >get confused with later references to Registry Objects >Line 330 - sentence starting with "In the following..." needs to be >revised. Maybe something like: "In the example below, information in >bold is what the reader should be focusing on." >Line 369 - In addition to the RepositoryItems, an ebXML Registry - or is >it Repository?? - is also capable of storing...? (says in the line >above that RepositoryItems are stored in the repository...) >In several places - "refered" should be "referred". >Line 415 - place the figure before the figure caption, so the caption >appears under the figure. > >More later... > > >Kathryn Breininger >CENTRAL Project Manager >Emerging Technologies >Boeing Library Services > >425-965-0182 phone >425-237-3491 fax >kathryn.r.breininger@boeing.com > > > >>How was your service? Please click link below....... >>http://socal.web.boeing.com/ssglibsurvey/ >> >> >> >> > >To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from the roster of the OASIS TC), go to http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/regrep/members/leave_workgroup.php. > > > -- Regards, Farrukh
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