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Subject: RS 3.0 draft review
Here is what I could find to be fixed (RS draft 2). Regards, Deigo -- Diego Ballve Digital Artefacts Europe http://www.digital-artefacts.fi
RS review (specs/regrep-rim-3.0-draft-01.pdf): - line 451: extra space in "EXAMPLE_ SERVICE_ID" - section 1.4.2: schemas used by the registry: add: wsse: http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/2004/01/oasis-200401-wss-wssecurity-secext-1.0.xsd wsu: http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/2004/01/oasis-200401-wss-wssecurity-utility-1.0.xsd - section 1.5: Table: typo: "Publsiher" - publisher x submitter: I prefer publisher in the sense that it is easier to grasp the idea. - line 508: typo "schema.r" - line 533: extra space "of metadata" - line 554: typo "inetrafces" - line 564/565: check font - section 2.1.4: check title - line 696: missing reference for ErrorType - line 796: typo " a the SOAP Binding is definee for " - line 797/798: rephrase to "For each portType corresponding to a registry service interface and defined in [RR-INT-WSDL], a <binding> element is defined with name <ServiceInterfaceName>Binding" - line 849: typo "722" - section 4.1.1, 4.1.2: Support both URL parameter "id" x "param-id"? - section 4.1.3: Reason for HTTP interface not to support LCM is that it requires POST? Well, some operations, but i would rephrase that. <------------------------- - line 963-978: duplicate text - section 4.2.1: Publisher defined URL must be unique: define behavior when it is not, - line 1022: typo "Similary" - Section 4.3: how to handle names that contain "/"? It should be scaped somehow. Which language to use? All, I suppose, unless specified? What if same object is matched in more than 1 language? Or mnore than 1 version? - line 1128: "lifecycle", when not a name, should be life cycle. - line 1129: extra space "the Lifecycle" - line 1195 "SOAP or [ebMS] Message", does ebMS have to appear there? - line 1396: missing reference - line 1613: use same case: "true" or "False" - line 2091: extra space ". A registy MUST" - line 2278: should "acme" be "Acme", like i the sql and in the description paragraph? - section 6.6.2.3: example is incomplete/missleading since it will find objects classified as ...industry/automotive but not as ...industry/automotive/passengercar, for instance. Use complete query as in FreebXML implementation or add a disclaiment note to that section. - line 2533: typo "Protcols" - line 2551: strange space (reference?) - section 7.3: plumbing classification, same coment as section 6.6.2.3, but here the plain English description excludes nested concepts. - section 7.3.3: what happens if the policy chanhes after subscription has been submitted? - line 2759: typo "one tha was" - line 3083: "cataloged" -> "validated"? - line 3123: typo "InavlidContentException" - line 3360: iterate query and federation: totalResultCount = (totalResultCount1 + ... + totalResultCountN)?? Not clearly written there. Also, the query behavior is not clear, it seems to me that you would never get to some of the results. - Section 9.2.7: Federation and Security: how is the user resolved? is it fetched from another registry if not local? It is needed for roles and groups checking, for instance. - line 3757: typo "A Registered User and sends" - Section 10.1.3: Repository Item: in-registry security relies on XACML. Message security, on SwA. If in-registry must be stored encrypted then client encrypts/decrypts it, and registry cannot do much but to store it. - line 3805/3806: no more RepositoryItem Signature. - Section 10.3.2.1/10.3.2.2: attachments will also be signed w/ message signature. - Section 10.3.4: Key Distribution: Registry could publish its public key through HTTP/S interface. - Section 10.4 and subsections: This section can be shrinked a lot: No more mime multipart No more special RepositoryItem signature (it is included in the message signature) Maybe include an example of signature for message w/ attachement. - line 4108: typo "Authenticatied" - When talking about pruning audit trail, specially old items go first, the oldest of them is probably a create event. That cannot be deleted because id defines ownership!! - line 4209: typo "The Resgistry is participates" - section 11.7: External Users: no references to = External Users cannot use LCM, only query, right? - line 4387: extra space "NLS ." - line 4389: typo "Protcols" - line 4474: my old typo: change "Exemplo the Custom ACP" to "Exemplo de ACP customizado" - line 4515: typo "regsitry" - line 4521: typo "confromance"
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