Subject: Re: [regrep] ebXML Registry lightning round.ppt - Please comment!
Chiusano Joseph wrote: >My recommendations: > >- Between slides 2 and 3, include a slide that answers the basic >question "What is an ebXML Registry?" (lift from the top paragraph of >ebRIM or ebRS 3.0). If this is not enough for an entire slide, >incorporate into slide 3. > >- Slide 4: Add dates for review and call for vote (top bullet) > >- Slide 5: Add the following features (feel free to lift directly out of >the early slides in the attached presentation I gave last month to the >federal XML CoP on our V3 enhancements): > >Registry Managed Version Control >Content Management Services > >- Slide 5: Consider categorizing enhancements (see attached >presentation) - e.g. SAML/XACML can go under a general "Security >Enhancements" bullet". May consider using a table for better >organization. > mm1: Many of the suggestions from Joe and others are valuable. Remember though that the brief is to be limited to 2-3 slides and that means the verbal delivery will fill in any details (prompted by audience questions and to highlight specific points). I would suggest we get to the core of information in 3 slides and make sure what is there counts. Thanks.