Re: [regrep] [Urgent Action] Please comment on OGC presentation

["Farrukh S. Najmi" <farrukh@wellfleetsoftware.com>]

David RR Webber (XML) wrote:
> Farrukh,
>  
> Slide 10 - IHE/XDS - worth putting link to the project of IBMs open source.
>  
> However - I think its more impressive to state something like:
>  
> IHE/XDS - fostered by NIST and IHE - healthcare secure document exchanges
>  - over 20 leading healthcare service companies developing solutions based on
>    original open source created by NIST
>  - IBM - open source implementation project
>  - design and requirements committee managed by IHE
>  
> We don't want to give impression that this is just IBM - while important - they 
> are not
> the only players!
>   
Above while excellent is a bit wordy for the real estate available.

I replaced original text with:

"Eclipse Open Healthcare Foundation IHE" which is more accurate. I will
be sure to recognize IBM's and NIST's contributions thought.

I think that meets the spirit of what you suggested. Thanks!
> "The way to be is to do" - Confucius (551-472 B.C.)
>
>
>     -------- Original Message --------
>     Subject: [regrep] [Urgent Action] Please comment on OGC presentation
>     From: "Farrukh S. Najmi" <farrukh@wellfleetsoftware.com>
>     Date: Thu, December 14, 2006 10:57 am
>     To: ebXML Regrep <regrep@lists.oasis-open.org>,  Ron Lake
>     <rlake@galdosinc.com>
>
>     Dear TC colleagues,
>
>     Sorry that about the last minute request for final comment on the OGC
>     slides:
>
>     <http://www.wellfleetsoftware.com/doc/presentations/ebXMLRegistryOGC.pdf>
>
>     I am very grateful to Nikola for his tireless help in reviewing and
>     editing this presentation.
>
>     I will incorporate any new comments that come in by 12PM ET.
>
>     Ron, please suggest any final changes from your perspective. Please note
>     that
>     I will keep to 20 minutes with 5 minutes for Q/A. To make this possible,
>     I will start at
>     slide 7 (Applications). The key slides are the 4 slides on Benefits of
>     ebRIM (slides 12-15).
>     These are followed by 3 slides on Benefits of ebRS for completeness. I
>     will skip these as ebRS is not our focus
>     for the meeting.
>
>     Please let me know if this is in the ballpark of your expectations.
>     Thank you.
>
>     -- 
>     Regards,
>     Farrukh
>
>     Web: http://www.wellfleetsoftware.com 
>
>   


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Regards,
Farrukh

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