work product review of SCA Assembly 1.1

[Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

The following issues have been identified in the submitted work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org and the public review announced:

1. Please accept the redline changes on the cover page items (other than the namespace change), the TOC, and the running footers. It makes it quite difficult to read and isn't pertinent to the changes under review.

2. URIs
Previous Version:
Please add the URI for the html version

Latest Approved Version:
Please delete; this hasn't been part of the templates for quite some time.

3. Notices Section:
Please provide the appropriate trademarked names in the 1st sentence of the last paragraph

4. References:
Please use the OASIS citation format for all references to OASIS work as shown in the templates and repeated below:

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NOTE: The proper format for a citation to an OASIS Technical Committee's work (whether Normative or Non-Normative) is:

OASIS 
Stage (Committee Draft 01, Committee Draft 02, Committee Specifcation 01, etc. or Standard)
Title (italicized or in quotation marks)
Approval Date (Month YYYY)
URI of the actual Authoritative Specification (namespace is not acceptable as the content changes over time)

For example:

[EDXL-HAVE]
OASIS Standard, "Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0", November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc
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Once the TC has made the appropriate changes, please resubmit the Committee Draft.

Regards,

Mary

Mary P McRae
Director, Standards Development
Technical Committee Administrator
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
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