| Hi Mike,
In reviewing the attached, I still see the following problems:
1. Please accept the redline changes on the cover page items (other than the namespace change), the TOC, and the running footers. It makes it quite difficult to read and isn't pertinent to the changes under review.
4. References:
The URIs included in OASIS citations are not to the actual Authoritative specification but to the 'latest version' URI
A number of the hypertext links in the reference section are different from the stated URI (for instance, but the hypertext link goes to: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/documents.php?wg_abbrev=wsbpel)
Regards,
Mary
On Feb 3, 2010, at 11:05 AM, Mike Edwards wrote:
Mary,
We have addressed the points listed
in your email and we have re-posted an updated version of the publication
package for the CD05 of the SCA Assembly
specification here:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-assembly/download.php/36240/sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd05.zip
We hope that you will be able to publish
this updated version.
Many thanks,
Yours, Mike.
Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014 Mobile: +44-7802-467431
Email: mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com
The following issues have been identified in the submitted
work products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to docs.oasis-open.org
and the public review announced:
1. Please accept the redline changes on the cover page items (other than
the namespace change), the TOC, and the running footers. It makes it quite
difficult to read and isn't pertinent to the changes under review.
2. URIs
Previous Version:
Please add the URI for the html version
Latest Approved Version:
Please delete; this hasn't been part of the templates for quite some time.
3. Notices Section:
Please provide the appropriate trademarked names in the 1st sentence of
the last paragraph
4. References:
Please use the OASIS citation format for all references to OASIS work as
shown in the templates and repeated below:
---
NOTE: The proper format for a citation to an OASIS Technical Committee's
work (whether Normative or Non-Normative) is:
OASIS
Stage (Committee Draft 01, Committee Draft 02, Committee Specifcation 01,
etc. or Standard)
Title (italicized or in quotation marks)
Approval Date (Month YYYY)
URI of the actual Authoritative Specification (namespace is not acceptable
as the content changes over time)
For example:
[EDXL-HAVE]
OASIS Standard, "Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital
AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0", November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc
---
Once the TC has made the appropriate changes, please resubmit the Committee
Draft.
Regards,
Mary
Mary P McRae
Director, Standards Development
Technical Committee Administrator
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
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