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Subject: Re: [sca-bindings] Groups - sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-issue61-rev2.docuploaded
Unfortunately my review comments on the previous version crossed with this update. Here are my updated comments for this version: 1. Section 1, third paragaph: Change [WSDL] reference to [WSDL11]. As this stands, it is ambiguous because the [WSDL] reference includes both WSDL 1.1 and WSDL 2.0. 2. Section 1.2: Remove WSDL 1.1 spec from the [WSDL] reference and change the name of this reference to [WSDL20]. 3. Section 2: In bullet describing wsdlElement, first paragraph, replace the sentence "This attribute points to the specified element in an existing WSDL document." by the following normative statement: "This attribute MUST point to an element in an existing WSDL document [WSDL11]. [BWSxxxxx]" 4. Section 2: In bullet describing wsdli:wsdlLocation, replace the sentence "The use of this attribute indicates that the WSDL binding points to an existing WSDL document." by the following normative statement: "If this attribute is used, the @wsdlElement attribute MUST also be specified. [BWSxxxxx]" 5. Section 2: In bullet describing wsdli:wsdlLocation, replace the [WSDL] reference in the final sentence by [WSDL20]. 6. Section 2.2: Replace the first sentence by the following normative statement: "When binding.ws is used on a service or reference that is not defined by interface.wsdl, the SCA runtime MUST derive a WSDL portType for the service or reference from the interface using the rules defined for that SCA interface type. [BWSxxxxx]" 7. Section 2.3, last sentence: Replace "rules that SHOULD be used" by "rules that are used", as suggested by Simon's comment. 8. Section 4: The second last sentence contains a non-RFC2119 "optional". Remove the whole sentence, as the paragraph is complete and clear without it. 9. Section 4.2.1: Replace second-last paragraph by: For an SCA service or reference element, the portType from the service or reference's interface or derived from the service or reference's interface MUST follow either the rpc-literal or document-literal pattern [BWS40004]. 10. Section 4.2.2: Change the fourth bullet to: Either the document literal or rpc literal pattern, depending on the service or reference interface as described in section 4.2.1: 11. Section 4.2.2: Change the fifth bullet to: For SOAP 1.1 messages, the SOAPAction HTTP header described in section 6.1.1 of "Simple Object Access Protocol (SOAP) 1.1" [SOAP] represents the empty string, in quotes ("") 12. Section 4.2.2: Replace the second last paragraph by: When using the default transport binding rules, the SCA runtime MAY provide additional WSDL bindings, unless policy is applied that explicitly restricts this. [BWS40006] 13. Section 4.2.2: Replace the last paragraph by: When using the default transport binding rules with the rpc-literal pattern, the SCA runtime SHOULD use the structural URI associated with the binding as the namespace of the child elements of the SOAP body element. [BWS40007] Simon simon_holdsworth@uk.ibm.com wrote: > Updated to remove normative statements from within the default transport > binding rules and some other wording improvements. > > -- Mr. Simon Holdsworth > > The document named sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-issue61-rev2.doc has been > submitted by Mr. Simon Holdsworth to the OASIS Service Component > Architecture / Bindings (SCA-Bindings) TC document repository. > > Document Description: > > > View Document Details: > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=32157 > > Download Document: > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32157/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-issue61-rev2.doc > > > PLEASE NOTE: If the above links do not work for you, your email application > may be breaking the link into two pieces. You may be able to copy and paste > the entire link address into the address field of your web browser. > > -OASIS Open Administration
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