Re: [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal v2

[Simon Nash <oasis@cjnash.com>]

Anish,
As currently written, the conformance section requires that
implementations claiming support for the SCA Web Services
Callback Protocol MUST support both the "regular" flavor
defined in section 5 and the WS-MC flavor defined in section
5.1.  I thought the intention was to give these two flavors
equal status and allow implementations to support either or
both of them.

I also have a few editorial comments:

1. Lines 368-373 (in the PDF) are logically part of numbered
    item 1 in the list and should be indented so that they line up
    with numbered item 1.

2. In section 5.2.4, Table 2 should be an Example or Figure
    rather than a Table.

3. In section 6.2, change "Web Services Callback Protocol" to
    "SCA Web Services Callback Protocol".

4. The wording of the last sentence of the first paragraph of
    Appendix D is awkward.  I suggest the following:
    The forward interface and the callback interface both contain
    a single one-way operation.

   Simon

Anish Karmarkar wrote:
> I didn't get any feedback on section 6 changes of inlined proposal v1 
> [1], so I'm assuming that folks are ok with it.
> 
> Attached is inlined v2, that includes all the missing references in 
> section 1.2 and changes to ensure that references to section 5 now point 
> to section 6 instead. I also added four introductory sentences.
> 
> -Anish
> -- 
> 
> [1] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200905/msg00019.html
> 
> PS: I got a copy of Word 2007 and used it to generate this proposal 
> (previously I was using Word 2k). I would be interested in finding out 
> if other versions of Word/OOo have any problems viewing the document.
> 
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