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Subject: RE: [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes to CAA spec
Hi, Thanks Dave for the document. Based on Dave's document, I've applied my edits [2] to this document and attached it to this email. Like Dave, I have not modified the filename but I have updated the date on the title page inside the document. There are a few of my editorial comments that I was not sure how I should apply them. I'll post these onto the mailing list for further discussion. Thanks, Mark > -----Original Message----- > From: David Booz [mailto:booz@us.ibm.com] > Sent: 23 May 2008 19:26 > To: sca-j-editors@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: Re: [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes to CAA spec > > Whew...took longer than I thought. > > Based on Anish's document, I made all the editorial changes that I was > comfortable with from Simon's review [3]-[5]. > > I attached the updated working draft. I did not modify the file name, but > I changed the date on the title page inside the document. > > (See attached file: sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03.doc) > > > I also have updated Simon's document by deleting all the comments that I > fixed. I'll post that on the main mailing list. > > Mark, It's your turn now. > > > Dave Booz > STSM, SCA and WebSphere Architecture > Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC > "Distributed objects first, then world hunger" > Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093 > e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com > http://washome.austin.ibm.com/xwiki/bin/view/SCA2Team/WebHome > > > > Anish Karmarkar > <Anish.Karmarkar@ > oracle.com> To > sca-j-editors@lists.oasis-open.org > 05/22/2008 02:35 cc > AM Michael Beisiegel/Somers/IBM@IBMUS > Subject > [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes > to CAA spec > > > > > > > > > > > Hi, > > I took an AI last week to coordinate amongst the editors and come up > with a deadline for our AI to update the CAA spec with all the editorial > changes. > > The editorial changes come from Mike [1], Mark [2] and Simon [3][4][5]. > Mike's changes contained both ed changes as well as RFC 2119 changes. I > have updated the WD (attached) to include only the ed changes and not > the 2119 changes as agreed on the concall two weeks ago. The attached > doc also contains the fix to include description of > InvalidServiceException that Dave had pointed out. > > So we have [2], [3], [4] and [5] as TODO. We agreed two weeks ago to > split the work. If we split it, I don't think it is that much work. > Could we agree to finish this by next week, i.e., 29th May? > > Pl. let me know. > > Thanks. > > -Anish > -- > > [1] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00036.html > [2] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200805/msg00002.html > [3] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00070.html > [4] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00071.html > [5] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00072.html > [attachment "sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03.doc" deleted by David > Booz/Poughkeepsie/IBM] > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. You may a link to this group and all your TCs in > OASIS > at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
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