RE: [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes to CAA spec

[Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>]

Folks,

To avoid the potential for some big
confusion, I recommend that every new version of a document
is given a unique name.  Date on
the front page isn't good enough, in my opinion.

In this case, I'd use something like:

sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03-01.doc
sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03-02.doc

etc, as drafts work up to a new full
WD release....

Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
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"Mark Combellack" <mcombellack@avaya.com>

27/05/2008 14:47

To	<sca-j-editors@lists.oasis-open.org>
cc	"David Booz" <booz@us.ibm.com>
Subject	RE: [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes to CAA spec

Hi,

Thanks Dave for the document. Based on Dave's document, I've applied my
edits [2] to this document and attached it to this email.

Like Dave, I have not modified the filename but I have updated the date
on the title page inside the document.

There are a few of my editorial comments that I was not sure how I
should apply them. I'll post these onto the mailing list for further
discussion.

Thanks,

Mark

> -----Original Message-----
> From: David Booz [mailto:booz@us.ibm.com]
> Sent: 23 May 2008 19:26
> To: sca-j-editors@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: Re: [sca-j-editors] Editorial changes to CAA spec
> 
> Whew...took longer than I thought.
> 
> Based on Anish's document, I made all the editorial changes that I
was
> comfortable with from Simon's review [3]-[5].
> 
> I attached the updated working draft.  I did not modify the file
name,
but
> I changed the date on the title page inside the document.
> 
> (See attached file: sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03.doc)
> 
> 
> I also have updated Simon's document by deleting all the comments
that
I
> fixed.  I'll post that on the main mailing list.
> 
> Mark, It's your turn now.
> 
> 
> Dave Booz
> STSM, SCA and WebSphere Architecture
> Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC
> "Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
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> 
> 
> 
>              Anish Karmarkar
>              <Anish.Karmarkar@
>              oracle.com>
To
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>              05/22/2008 02:35
cc
>              AM      
                 Michael
Beisiegel/Somers/IBM@IBMUS
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                   [sca-j-editors]
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> 
> Hi,
> 
> I took an AI last week to coordinate amongst the editors and come
up
> with a deadline for our AI to update the CAA spec with all the
editorial
> changes.
> 
> The editorial changes come from Mike [1], Mark [2] and Simon
[3][4][5].
> Mike's changes contained both ed changes as well as RFC 2119 changes.
I
> have updated the WD (attached) to include only the ed changes and
not
> the 2119 changes as agreed on the concall two weeks ago. The attached
> doc also contains the fix to include description of
> InvalidServiceException that Dave had pointed out.
> 
> So we have [2], [3], [4] and [5] as TODO. We agreed two weeks ago
to
> split the work. If we split it, I don't think it is that much work.
> Could we agree to finish this by next week, i.e., 29th May?
> 
> Pl. let me know.
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> -Anish
> --
> 
> [1] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00036.html
> [2] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200805/msg00002.html
> [3] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00070.html
> [4] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00071.html
> [5] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-j/200804/msg00072.html
> [attachment "sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-WD03.doc" deleted by David
> Booz/Poughkeepsie/IBM]
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