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Subject: basic restructure complete
Here is my attempt to demonstrate a better flow to the document. I took the liberty of calling it WD02. - moved section 3.1(old) to section 6.5(new). - moved section 3.2(old) to section 6.6(new). - moved section 5(old) to section 6(new)....and therefore section 6(old) became section 5(new). A swap. I made a surprising number of changes to section 6(old), 5(new), which are change barred and tracked. I made NO changes to section 5(old), 6(new). This is nice because it shows up as inserted text after the move, so you wouldn't be able to see changes anyway. I tried to update all the section references to point to the new sections. I may have missed some. I accepted the large block deletes to make the document navigable. All the large block deletes where actually a cut AND paste, so no content should be lost.. I hope you could follow that, and I hope you think the document flows better now. No doubt there are some problems lingering, but hopefully those are details to be worked out. (See attached file: sca-jee-1[1].1-spec-wd02.doc) Dave Booz STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC "Distributed objects first, then world hunger" Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093 e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com
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