Re: [sca-j] JAVA-98: Updated proposal including PolicySets changes

[Simon Nash <oasis@cjnash.com>]

Dave,
You chose the correct version.  Apologies for the version confusion.

+1 for both of these suggestions.  I think your reworded paragraph
should go after line 783.

Similar rewording is needed for lines 1053-1057.  This paragraph
should be moved to after line 1048.

   Simon

David Booz wrote:
> Not sure which documents to comment on, so I'm using the documents 
> referenced in this email chain. I only had a small bit of time this AM, 
> so here's what I've got so far.
> 
> Java CAA (+policySet):
> (a) lines 799-802: This needs to be rewritten to make it easier to read. 
> Does the following work?
> 
> Intent annotations can be applied to classes, interfaces, and interface 
> methods. Applying an intent annotation to a field, setter method, or 
> constructor parameter allows intents to be defined at references. Intent 
> annotations can also be applied to reference interfaces and their methods.
> 
> (b) The same lines mentioned in (a) should come much earlier in the 
> section, not at the end.
> 
> 
> Dave Booz
> STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
> Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
> "Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
> Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093
> e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com
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> Inactive hide details for Simon Nash ---04/19/2009 06:45:16 PM---My 
> apologies for all the proposal churn. The following links Simon Nash 
> ---04/19/2009 06:45:16 PM---My apologies for all the proposal churn. The 
> following links include changes for @PolicySets to mak
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> From:	
> Simon Nash <oasis@cjnash.com>
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> Date:	
> 04/19/2009 06:45 PM
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> Subject:	
> [sca-j] JAVA-98: Updated proposal including PolicySets changes
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> 
> My apologies for all the proposal churn.  The following links include
> changes for @PolicySets to make this consistent with the changes for
> intent annotations.
> 
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/32147/sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-cd02-rev4%20issue98%20PolicySets.doc
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/32148/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd07%20issue98%20policySets.doc
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/32149/sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-cd02-rev4%20issue98%20PolicySets.pdf
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/32150/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd07%20issue98%20policySets.pdf
> 
> Please review this version of the proposal.
> 
>   Simon
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