Hi Dave,
I have reviewed the updated WD09 of the
C&I specification and have the following review comments:
Editorial
Comments
- Inconsistent
indentation on the following lines:
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Lines 2 –
11
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Lines 13
– 15
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Line 45
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Lines
267 – 271
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Lines
281 – 283
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Lines
373 – 650 – i.e. whole of chapter 8
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Lines
676 – 803 – i.e. whole of chapter 10
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Lines
779 – 791 – Consider indenting this list further than the paragraphs
that surround it
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Lines
827 – 841 - Consider indenting this list further than the paragraphs that
surround it
- Lines
65, 71, 96 & 121: Add “package services.hello;” since
composite XML in lines 83 – 90 has a package name
- Line
234: Change method name to setMaxRetries to match the variable name. Not
strictly required but do we really need to introduce an example at this
point that shows different method names/field names?
- Split
the code comments on the following lines onto multiple lines as it splits
in an untidy way:
·
Lines
295 – 296
·
Lines
306 – 307
- Line
908 – Consider making the Conformance ID column narrower since there
is a lot of unused whitespace in the table
Thanks,
Mark
Mark Combellack| Software Developer| Avaya |
From:
David Booz [mailto:booz@us.ibm.com]
Sent: 29 April 2009 16:21
To: sca-j@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [sca-j] Java CI spec
- up to date issues applied
Simon,
Thanks for the thorough review. I've made all the updates (and a few more that
I spotted along the way) and published new documents. If anyone else has
comments on WD08, no worries, I will fold them in on top of this new WD09 draft
and produce another set of documents. If you haven't started reviewing yet,
WD09 is as good a place to start as any.
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32313/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd09.doc
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32312/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd09.pdf
Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com
Simon Nash ---04/29/2009 05:22:04
AM---Dave, I have reviewed this and I have a number of editorial comments. I
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Dave,
I have reviewed this and I have a number of
editorial comments. I have
recorded these as inline Word comments in the
attached .doc file.
Simon
David Booz wrote:
> Here are the links to a current Java CI spec.
We have never published a
> CD of this spec, so please review it and all
predecessors carefully as
> this is the basis for CD01 and PRD. The
sooner you can review and
> provide comments, the sooner I can fold in
the changes and re-publish.
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32270/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd08.doc
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32269/sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd08.pdf
>
>
> Dave Booz
> STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
> Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
> "Distributed objects first, then world
hunger"
>
> e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com
>
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