Re: [sca-policy] Changes required to submitted document - sca-policy-1.1-spec-cd03

[David Booz <booz@us.ibm.com>]

Hi Kim,

Thanks for the list of corrections. All the documents have been updated and
are here [1].

[1]
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37719/sca-policy-1.1-spec-cd03.zip

thanks

Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093  or  8-295-6093
e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com


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  |Kim Goolsby <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>                                                                                                          |
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  |sca-policy@lists.oasis-open.org                                                                                                                   |
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  |Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>                                                                                                            |
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  |05/10/2010 04:04 PM                                                                                                                               |
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  |[sca-policy] Changes required to submitted document - sca-policy-1.1-spec-cd03                                                                    |
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Please make the following corrections to this submitted document:

1. The hyperlinks in the Previous Version section do not resolve because of
an incorrect filename. In the hyperlink, please change the version 'cd-02'
to 'cd02'.

2. In the Technical Committee section on the title page, please spell out
the entire TC name.

3. For the Editor(s) & Chair(s), I would suggest activating the email
hyperlinks.

4. In Related Work on the title page, please create a hyperlink for
• SCA Policy Framework Specification Version 1.00 March 07, 2007

5. In the footer, please change the date format to DD Month YYYY (08 May
2010). It currently reads '4-08-2010'.

6. In Normative References, the OASIS reference [WS-AtomicTransaction] is
incorrectly formatted. Please change to match the other correctly formatted
OASIS references in this document. There is also an extra line after this
reference, I suggest removing it.

7. In Normative References, please activate the hyperlink for [WS-Policy].

8.  In Normative References, [WS-PolicyAttach] contains an invalid
hyperlink. Please correct.

Please feel free to contact me with any questions.

Thank you,
Kim
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Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
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phone: 1.734.223.6890