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Subject: Re: [sca-policy] Changes required to submitted document - sca-policy-1.1-Test-Assertions-CD01.zip
Hi Kim,
As requested, I made the changes and put the files here [1].
[1]
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37721/sca-policy-1.1-Test-Assertions-CD01.zip
thanks
Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093
e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com
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|[sca-policy] Changes required to submitted document - sca-policy-1.1-Test-Assertions-CD01.zip |
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Please make the following corrections to this submitted document:
1. For Previous Version, please add 'N/A' as this is first committee draft.
2. For Technical Committee on the title page, please activate this
hyperlink.
3. In the Chairs section, please activate David Booz's email address.
4. In the Status section's last paragraph, there is an extra line in the
sentence. Please move the hyperlink up.
5. The Notices section is missing the paragraph breaks. Please change to
match the template.
6. The Table of Contents is not formatted correctly. Please regenerate so
that it includes chapter numbers (1,2,3,etc) & appendices letters (A,B,C).
7. In the first paragraph under the Terminology heading, I suggest that you
fix the hyperlink. It currently contains the word 'in' as part of the link.
8. In the Normative References section, [TA-GUIDE] is formatted
incorrectly. Please change per the following citation example:
OASIS
Stage (Committee Draft 01, Committee Draft 02, Committee Specification 01,
etc. or Standard)
Title (italicized or in quotation marks)
Approval Date (Month YYYY)
URI of the actual Authoritative Specification (namespace is not acceptable
as the content changes over time)
For example:
EDXL-HAVE OASIS Standard, “Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital
AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0”, November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc
9. In the Normative References section, please activate the hyperlink for
[JAVACAA].
10. Please change the Non-Normative References header to two initial caps
(Non-Normative, not Non-normative).
11. In the Acknowledgments appendix, I suggest that you remove the extra
line between 'Participants' & the table. By doing this the table should fit
on one page, so that the entry for Mr. Zubec is not orphaned on the second
page.
Please feel free to contact me with any questions.
Thank you,
Kim
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Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 1.734.223.6890
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