2.1.1.6

[Julia McCarthy <julia@us.ibm.com>]

John has done some extensive rewording which he sent to us in a separate note. I'm going to start pulling those requirements out one at a time for discussion. Please try to respond - even just to say you agree.


Starting with 2.1.1.6. Here's John's suggested rewrite:
Option 1) 2.1.1.6 The SDD specification must support the ability for the author to define the requirements that must be met for a provisioning application or installation program to rollback or undo a deployment lifecycle operation. The SDD specification must support the ability for the author to define information needed for a provisioning application or installation program to rollback or undo a deployment lifecycle operation.

Here's my additional wordsmithing based both on our discussion about phrasing and just my own idea of what makes a sentence understandable. I believe that this stays true to the meaning of John's rewrite.
Option 2) 2.1.1.6 The SDD specification must support definition of information required by a provisioning application or installation program to perform rollback and undo lifecycle operations. This includes information about requirements that must be met prior to performing these operations.

Please vote for option 1 or option 2, or propose an alternative along with providing your reasons for suggesting an alternative.

Julia McCarthy
Autonomic Computing Enablement
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