Re: [sdd] Groups - OASIS SDD Primer-WD6.j comment.lazar upd.doc uploaded

[Brent Miller <bamiller@us.ibm.com>]

Thanks, Lazar, I'll have a look at at
this (and encourage others to do the same).

For everyone's information, I have made
changes to address all of Julia's comments; these are in a separate version
of the document and I'll merge these into the final review copy once we
agree on any/all changes from Lazar.

Regards,
Brent

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lazar.borissov@sap.com

02/12/2008 09:10 AM

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Subject	[sdd] Groups - OASIS SDD Primer-WD6.j comment.lazar upd.doc uploaded

Hi,
I changed again chapter 4.3
I do not think we shall change 4.2 for simple JRE example as it is a simple
package/deployment descriptor pair and almost every line is described in
the primer. I was not able to change 5 (Additional Considerations) and
wonder if we need to change this at all. As these two examples are not
complete SDD examples but rather deployment descriptors focusing on some
particular SDD features.

The base for the change was version "OASIS SDD Primer-WD6[1][1].j
comments.doc" from Julia so her comments are in the doc. I removed
all
text-formatting I did leaving only track-data for the text I added. 

The "building block" sentences are removed.

I added more info how resources from topology section are later used in
the
deployment descriptor and also more comments how topology in composite
maps
to the resources in topologies in references SDDs.

Also added section for the Languages-section in composite descriptor and
how it maps to the LocalizationContent. Please check if this is not
wrong.

best regards,
Lazar

 -- Mr. Lazar Borissov

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Document Description:
Hi,
I changed again chapter 4.3
I do not think we shall change 4.2 for simple JRE example as it is a simple
package/deployment descriptor pair and almost every line is described in
the primer. I was not able to change 5 (Additional Considerations) and
wonder if we need to change this at all. As these two examples are not
complete SDD examples but rather deployment descriptors focusing on some
particular SDD features.

The base for the change was version "OASIS SDD Primer-WD6[1][1].j
comments.doc" from Julia so her comments are in the doc. I removed
all
text-formatting I did leaving only track-data for the text I added. 

The "building block" sentences are removed.

I added more info how resources from topology section are later used in
the
deployment descriptor and also more comments how topology in composite
maps
to the resources in topologies in references SDDs.

Also added section for the Languages-section in composite descriptor and
how it maps to the LocalizationContent. Please check if this is not
wrong.

best regards,
Lazar

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