RE: [sdo] Remaining RFC 2119 comments

["von Mersewsky, Ulf" <ulf.von.mersewsky@sap.com>]

Hi,

 

Here are my comments for section 1-3 and 4.7 to the end.

 

By mistake I didn’t use a clean copy of Ron’s draft but Bryan’s version from August 26^th (comments  for 4.10 – 7.11).

 

Best regards,

Ulf

 

From: Bryan Aupperle [mailto:aupperle@us.ibm.com]
Sent: Tuesday, September 01, 2009 9:44 PM
To: sdo@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [sdo] Remaining RFC 2119 comments

 

Same approach as with my second draft.  This starts with a clean version of Ron's draft  and covers Sections 1-3 and 8 to the end.


Bryan Aupperle, Ph.D.
STSM, WebSphere Enterprise Platform Software Solution Architect

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